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The Queen Anne, my first attempt at something in the way of steampunk. Let me know what you think!
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*47ness Oct 1, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Nice assortment of detail...! I love your eye for color schemes. Nice anatomy detail on the pointing hand~

I had a few thoughts of criticism though. I think the immediate issue is that some of the elements are not in perspective. The woman's arm should be coming forwards more in the same manner as the map, screen schematics, and book. There's also the matter of atmospheric perspective, which is the phenomenon of objects in the background being lighter and hazier than objects in the front. The mountains in the very back would be super light and washed out, especially.

And... also just as a minor detail, the big knife being stuck into the table feels odd, since the table looks like a digital screen... ^^;
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~Dan-Lerner Oct 2, 2010  Professional General Artist
Absolutely agree and thank you so much for taking the time to make these suggestions and advice. I really appreciate it. I especially like that you mentioned atmospheric perspective, as this is something I often forget about. Man, my next piece will take all this in to account. Again thank you, I want to progress!
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Mood: Optimism *47ness Oct 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Sure. I had to have stuff like that beaten into my head too. ^~ It's an ongoing experience.
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:iconcptstarlight:
I'm not in to boob tattoos, but I sure like these!
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:iconmadhatterzwei:
Very cool; I love her tattoos. She's the kind of badass steampunk captain person I want to be.
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