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I had a few thoughts of criticism though. I think the immediate issue is that some of the elements are not in perspective. The woman's arm should be coming forwards more in the same manner as the map, screen schematics, and book. There's also the matter of atmospheric perspective, which is the phenomenon of objects in the background being lighter and hazier than objects in the front. The mountains in the very back would be super light and washed out, especially.
And... also just as a minor detail, the big knife being stuck into the table feels odd, since the table looks like a digital screen...